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BANGKOK 22 October 2018 10:42
MarvinKh

Evaluate my photo of Bali beach

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2 hours ago, phuketrichard said:

washed out water, way to over photo shoppped for me

Thanks. I will have to work on it. 

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Very busy with the whites top and bottom. Maybe less is more .. but you have skills i don't.

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2 minutes ago, optad said:

Very busy with the whites top and bottom. Maybe less is more .. but you have skills i don't.

Thanks for the feedback. I agree with you now then I think about it, less is more. I'd better not get too overboard with stitching n huge megapixels output, I doubt I'd print billboards anyway. 

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My god man,that image is huge!!!

 

I would say,on the whole it is a good attempt!

 

A couple of things that did catch my eye,were the harshness of the brightness in the waves and also midway down the right hand side of the waves,something went amiss with the stitching,but that would be only to be expected on a fast moving subject,like waves.

 

 

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On 1/19/2017 at 2:34 AM, shaggy1969 said:

My god man,that image is huge!!!

 

I would say,on the whole it is a good attempt!

 

A couple of things that did catch my eye,were the harshness of the brightness in the waves and also midway down the right hand side of the waves,something went amiss with the stitching,but that would be only to be expected on a fast moving subject,like waves.

 

 

The right side u mentioned wasn't there, i cloned some waves n filled in. It was a sloppy job, need to work on that. Thank for the feedback, I'll try harder or, go smaller :) 

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yes, too HDR looking, too much colour, water washed out, not focussed either on sky or sea (golden ratio !)

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highlights in water blown, sky over saturated colorwise. 

no real issue with composition, but its just far too overcooked.

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7 minutes ago, HeikoJT said:

yes, too HDR looking, too much colour, water washed out, not focussed either on sky or sea (golden ratio !)

 

regarding your composition comments, i think the whole thing is quite rule of thirds. 

i think the blown water just distracts from it all by dragging the eye too far down.

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Love the sky you captured

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